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write back part 4 (by caitlan-)

dear jill
i just want to hold you tight
the bullets and screaming keep me up at night
i love you so much
and over here its starting to get tough

i'm just so glad
that you can't see
the screaming faces
pleaing back at me

i miss you so bad
and our love is plain to see
when i return home i would be so glad
if jill- you could please marry me?

i know i don't have much
but if i did i'd give you it all
coz jill believe me
you are my life, you are my girl

i love you baby
and i never wanna lose you
when things get tough
i know we're going to pull through

because i am yours
and you are mine
and we'll be together
to the end of time

i 'll be home soon
i love you

dear jack
you are the sweetest
the answer is yes
i have waited much too long
for that question to come along

and as soon as you get back
and i say "i do, jack"
we can kiss
and live in bliss

come home soon
i love you

---

dear jack
where you are now, you can't read this letter
&everyday i prayed our last goodbye would be better
and even though from up above
you look down with only love

it still pains me to know
that imust face this world alone
that never again can i see you face
or feel your warmth.. suffocate in your grace.

because i am yours
and you are mine
and we'll be together
to the end of time

and i hope you wait
so in heaven we can meet
and have the life we planned
jack, you will always be my man

the deed is done- love is the deal
you're mine forever
goodbye, love Jill


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